some people say Technology has improved our world. do you agree or disagree with this view?

At present time we live at the age of renovations, that facilitate our life and make it easier rather than past. Due to

this

fact majority of people consider that any kind of created technologies is beneficial for us. Even though

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it helps us to deal with various challenges, I can not be agreed with

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statement. For a number of years our ancestors lived without mechanic devices, and they were very wise and healthy compared with us. Today, we are getting lazier and becoming more addicted to gadgets.

Moreover

, it has a bad influence on our health,

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we stopped doing physical actions by relying on technical devices and

finally

it causes some problems in our body due to the fact of damaging blood circulation. As we always try to use household appliances

instead

of cleaning the house by ourselves.

On the other hand

, technology strikingly impacts our young generation. Mainly, teenagers have the capability to waste their whole time using technical tools especially cell phones, laptops, or computers. They don't care about the harms of these gadgets.

For instance

, the child can lose his eyesight by contemporary looking at the light screen of the computer or mobile phones.

Additionally

, all types of communication devices or the tools that have access to the internet can destroy the outlook of the child who is in the step of growing. Taking all into consideration, it concludes that technology has

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adverse sides rather than positive ones. Even it provides us with a better lifestyle, it can cause more issues that are related to our psychology as well as our health.