Some people think that a persons improve their intellectual skills more when doing a group activity. To what extend do you agree.

In some perspectives, individuals benefit from group activities, whilst

such

events provoke various advantages for the acquisition of intelligence, I could only partially agree with

such

opinions

due to

a few drawbacks which will be discussed in the following article. On the one hand, it is inevitable that interacting with

others

could improve one's intellectual skills, including stimulating critical thinking

as well as

expanding one's horizons. There is evidence indicating that students have better improvements when they have a disagreement with

others

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since it could encourage them to see from different angles.

Moreover

, interacting with people who have different background allow them to experience various thoughts formed by different cultures which helps them to have better academic performance.

On the other hand

, there is

downside

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that should not be overlooked,

such

as only the minority who are able to play essential roles in the teams, which is to say, they have a better chance to improve their personal capacities with the experience of handling difficult

tasks

,

while

others

can only implement simple

tasks

.

For instance

, when doing group presentations, despite it requires teamwork, students are more likely to assign crucial

tasks

to the same people based on their outstanding performance at school, and

others

could only cope with simple work, which could barely help them to improve their intelligence. To summarize, it is true that there are various positive effects derived from group activities that could enhance their intellectual,

however

, I personally could only partially agree with them since there are some disadvantages that allow only a few people to improve their smartness in the groups

due to

uneven assignment of

tasks

.