An increasing number of people are turning to vegetarians. Some people believe that people are following a vegetarian diet for reasons other than animal right. Do you agree?

Vegeterians
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Vegetarians
are a group of people with a special diet, that mostly consists of consuming green food and avoiding meat or for some of them even all of the products that are being provided by
animals
. Being vegetarian is a new trend of the twentieth century,
which
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protecting
animals
is said to be the main reason
of
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choosing
this
lifestyle.
However
, it is noteworthy to bear in mind
that is
not the only factor and I believe the majority of them are pursuing other reasons. The following essay will overlook two of those rationales.
Firstly
, having a healthy body is a goal that has always been located above all for many people. It has been proven in many
researches
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that green vegetables contain essential nutrients for the body.
For example
, our bodies receive a lot of minerals and vitamins by eating fruits and vegetables.
In contrast
, it has
also
been shown that meat is a risk factor
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several diseases, like colon cancer.
Therefore
, the young generation, who have greater access to those researches compared to the past, are more aware now and consume more vegetables to remain healthy.
Moreover
,
vegi
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vegan
food contains much lower
calory
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calories
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than the same amount
meat
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of meat
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. So, many
of
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vegetarians choose
this
diet to stay fit.
Secondly
, human has an inclination to the popular trends. As said above,
this
novel diet is getting more popular among the youngsters and
also
there are being encouraged by advertisements on the social media and ower the town.
For instance
, pretending to be a vegetarian is not out of mind when a teenager is out with their vegetarian friends who are ordering the new
vegie
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veggie
hamburger of a restaurant.
Thus
, many of them have been forced to choose
this
lifestyle by others or by the situation they are in. To sum up,
Although
saving
animals
is one of the obvious reasons
of
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being vegetarian, it is not the only one. I believe that people are mostly choosing it either for having a healthy body or for following the trend.
Finally
, with whatever rationales they are protecting hundreds of
animals
that
is
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valuable.
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