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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Many
people
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 believe that one of the biggest communal and practical challenges of living abroad is the
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 barrier. I partly agree with
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 statement for some reasons. Communication skills will be limited when
people
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 live in another country using another
language
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instead
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 of their mother tongue. It leads to many different problems, including social and practical issues. The social problem is the
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 barrier.
People
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 who speak a foreign
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 will find it is very hard to communicate with other
people
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 of a different culture. If the
foreigners
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 speak their
language
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,
people
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 who speak the native
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 will not understand what they are trying to convey. The government will not be able to manage the
foreigners
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 because they cannot communicate with the
foreigners
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.
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, the government needs to pay considerable money to hire translators to help them communicate. Apart from that, the inability to speak the local
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 may negatively affect one’s daily activities.
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, some
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 find it challenging to go shopping at the local market.
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, at their workplace, they may face many problems.
Foreigners
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 need to be able to communicate with other
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 in their company. If they struggle with
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, they may be unable to express their ideas. Because of that,
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 trouble can affect the probability of promotion.
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, these individuals often doubt themselves and feel underconfident.
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, many
people
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 say that the
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 barrier is not the primary problem as today many
people
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 are very good at
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. They are
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 brilliant, so these
people
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 can help the area to develop the economy. For these reasons, I think that living in a country with poor access to the local
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 is challenging both social and practical for some
people
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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