You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Asad, I am Hafiz Mahmood Hussain and I have been living in your neighbour for 3 years. I am writing
this
letter to inform and invite you to a party which will be held in my home. I am moving to a new house and want to give a dinner party to my old neighbour.
First
of all, I am happy that my dream of buying a lavish house has been completed.
Therefore
, I planned to arrange dinner for my friends and some of my neighbours.
Furthermore
, I want to tell you, we will hold a music
compition
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competition
where
me
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and my
collegues
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colleagues
will perform. It is just for entertainment and of course music and people noise will reach your house.
Therefore
, I am sorry in advance for
this
disturbance in your sleeping.
Secondly
, as you are my
nieghbour
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neighbour
and we have
a
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good relationship throughout the living duration. It is my humble request that you join us and celebrate with us. Your presence will very important for me. We will
wait
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you and your family.
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Your
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sincerely, XYZ
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • housewarming
  • neighbourhood
  • settle in
  • concern
  • apologize
  • disturbance
  • kindly
  • considerate
  • join
  • gathering
  • introduce
  • socialize
  • appreciate
  • understanding
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