Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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it is significant than to built more construction. In the forthcoming
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we will discuss these
ideas
and I put my own viewpoint whether I agree or disagree.
First
of, all we look after to nurture
becouse
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because
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nurture
nature
takes water,nutrients and more basic
oxygen
. I emphasize that if there
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oxygen
we do not breathe,
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and
earth
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may be desert as well nowhere plants will grow up.
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distiribute
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distribute
oxygen
.
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and
palnts
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plants
keep the
world
,
also
many
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of
trees
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located
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this
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of the
world
however
notwithstanding
people
cut
trees
over the year and
instead
of them building
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something
for living or relaxing places so
rhat
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that
plot pollution.
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we
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contribute
grow up
trees
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as a
result
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we prevent most of
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. Everyone increment to
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trees
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we see above.
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in the
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though not to destroy
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trees
. In
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fresh air and eating
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food nurture to
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nature
and phase out cutting. I could go on and on with
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but I am sure you get the
notionof
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countries
have
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been upgraded
they
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have been building
sky scrapers
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,
as a
result
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,result
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public have not
nurture
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nurtured
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to
nuture
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nature
nurture
. According to these
ideas
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,ideas
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some
people
belived
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believed
believe
that
grow
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growing
show examples
up seedlings,
trees
where open areas in
regiouns
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regions
it is significant than to built more construction. In the forthcoming
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paragraph
pragraph
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,pragraph
show examples
we will discuss these
ideas
and I put my own viewpoint whether I agree or disagree.
First
of, all we look after to nurture
becouse
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because
nuture
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nurture
nature
takes water,nutrients and more basic
oxygen
. I emphasize that if there
are
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is
show examples
not
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no
show examples
oxygen
we do not breathe,
people
will
dead
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die
show examples
and
earth
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the earth
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may be desert as well nowhere plants will grow up.
Trees
distirute
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distribute
oxygen
.
Trees
and
palnts
Correct your spelling
plants
keep the
world
,
also
many
piece
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pieces
show examples
of
trees
loceted
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located
in Canada and
this
country
named
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is named
show examples
lung
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the lung
show examples
of the
world
however
notwithstanding
people
cut
trees
over the year and
instead
of them building
somethibg
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something
for living or relaxing places so
rhat
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that
plot pollution.
Secondly
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,Secondly
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we
comtribuite
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contribute
grow up
trees
and flowers and staple,
as a
result
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,result
show examples
we prevent most of
illness
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the illness
show examples
. Everyone increment to
grows
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grow
show examples
trees
where they live. I stand with eagerly
embrace
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embracing
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mention
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the mention
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which
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that
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we see above.
That is
true buildings are generous and resplendent all of
countries
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the countries
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in the
world
though not to destroy
instead
of
trees
. In
concluation
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conclusion
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,
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if we want to healthy
live
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life
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, inbreathing
with
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apply
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fresh air and eating
whole some
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wholesome
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food nurture to
nuture
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nurture
nature
and phase out cutting. I could go on and on with
example
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examples
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but I am sure you get the notion
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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