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Some people think that government should invest in saving local languages while others think its a waste of money. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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 day and age, a minor language is
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disappeared
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. It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that local
languages
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 should be protected by the investment of
governments
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.
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, others believe that it is a waste of money. Regarding
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, I strongly believe that
govenments
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governments
 should allocate state funds to keeping local
languages
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 as well as other public
services
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.
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 the one hand, some people argue that
governments
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 should spend money providing better public
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 and urgent issues rather than saving a local language. While inhabitants can use other strong
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such
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 as English for a living, they cannot be survived without proper public
services
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, education, healthcare
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, and transportation are
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key
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factors
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 in
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apply
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living.
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, according to the theory of the hierarchy of needs by Maslow, before people achieve basic needs
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 as accommodations, food, and garments, they cannot feel safe and love which are important to lead to
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. As the example clearly illustrates,
governments
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 should use
money
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the money
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 on public
services
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instead
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 of keeping local
languages
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.
On the other hand
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, by saving local
languages
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 in
monor
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donor
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 countries, people can keep national
identities
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. As
languages
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 are the most important part of cultures, once they lose
thier
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their
 own culture, national
identities
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 will be disappeared.
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, when Japan
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conquered
 Korea almost 100 years ago,
Japanese
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the Japanese
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 banned Koreans
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 Korean
first
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 since they believed that losing
languages
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 means losing cultures, thereby leading to losing national
identities
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.
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,
government
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the government
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 should allocate funds to maintain local
languages
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 in order to keep national
identities
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. In conclusion, while I accept that public
services
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 are essential for a living, there is no doubt to point out that saving local
languages
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 is not less important than them.
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,
governments
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 should balance between providing fine public
services
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 and keeping local
languages
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.

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