Some people think that government should invest in saving local languages while others think its a waste of money. Discuss both views and your opinion.

In
this
day and age, a minor language is
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disappeared
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. It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that local
languages
should be protected by the investment of
governments
.
However
, others believe that it is a waste of money. Regarding
this
, I strongly believe that
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governments
should allocate state funds to keeping local
languages
as well as other public
services
.
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the one hand, some people argue that
governments
should spend money providing better public
services
and urgent issues rather than saving a local language. While inhabitants can use other strong
languages
such
as English for a living, they cannot be survived without proper public
services
.
In other words
, education, healthcare
services
, and transportation are
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key
factor
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in
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living.
For example
, according to the theory of the hierarchy of needs by Maslow, before people achieve basic needs
such
as accommodations, food, and garments, they cannot feel safe and love which are important to lead to
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. As the example clearly illustrates,
governments
should use
money
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the money
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on public
services
instead
of keeping local
languages
.
On the other hand
, by saving local
languages
in
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donor
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countries, people can keep national
identities
. As
languages
are the most important part of cultures, once they lose
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their
own culture, national
identities
will be disappeared.
For instance
, when Japan
conqured
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conquered
Korea almost 100 years ago,
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the Japanese
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banned Koreans
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Korean
first
since they believed that losing
languages
means losing cultures, thereby leading to losing national
identities
.
Therefore
,
government
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should allocate funds to maintain local
languages
in order to keep national
identities
. In conclusion, while I accept that public
services
are essential for a living, there is no doubt to point out that saving local
languages
is not less important than them.
Therefore
,
governments
should balance between providing fine public
services
and keeping local
languages
.
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