‘Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt political life is hard because they have to share their

lives

with the public.

This

is true that they have personal

lives

that should not be shared with other people through the newspapers.

Also

, I fully agree with

this

statement and discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs. To start with, representatives have to keep a balance between their careers and

lives

While

the reported wants to be famous and viral their videos so they publish everything in articles. To illustrate it, a famous member of parliament Mrs Sukhbir Singh had to face various problems

due to

these articles because a reporter wrote wrong things about his wife.

After

this

, he not only lost his career but

also

her.

Therefore

, public servant should be privileged to hide their private

lives

Furthermore

, the public takes more interest in other lifestyles.

Although

the representatives make good decisions to succeed the nation.

However

, people forget these things, and when they hear breaking news

then

they change their thinking about them.

For example

, in 2016 a survey was done by university students that political people make everything perfect with their wise but if a piece of news is against them

then

humankind does not like them and they want to change their party.

Thus

, here jobs and hard work do not matter, only articles play a role in the public's

lives

. In conclusion, the administration should make a rule against news that should be written in newspapers and those that are not harmful to their career and personal relationships because should enjoy their

lives

without any worries.

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‘Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measure can be done to address those problems?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion