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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays due to advancements in technology and the internet people can access
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 of printed media but I do not think it will completely wipe out the older form of communication and reading as it is not convenient for all age group and all classes of society and elaborate
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 paragraphs. In today's era of computers and electronic ,networks folks can find information and read the latest news and
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 on screen whenever and wherever they want without paying for it from any corner of the world. For the same reason number of universities started providing online courses for their students and saving students time ,money and effort for travelling to university.Online
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 are more interactive as they can have more illustrative capabilities due to technological tools available to assist,
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 famous medical and other journals can be accessed in a timely manner as they got updated on the internet,
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 is ecofriendly as fewer trees need to cut for manufacturing the previous one. In ,contrast internet and computers are costly ,so they are not accessible for each and everyone in society,in ,addition these technologies requires training for using them and are not suitable for the younger population as well as the senior group because they are not comfortable in using those technological gadgets.
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 are more users friendly for
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 of getting totally out of the market So in final say I partially agree with the above statement as advancement in science and technology will replace the
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 in a major share of civilians but it will remain in place as a small group of the community will require them due to their limitation of skills and level of comfort in using them.
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