Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern world because of the advancement of ,technology the time required for anyone to capture particular knowledge is too small. One portion of the society believes that providing the
research
information is always a good approach while the other side believes that there should be secrecy needed for some kind of analysis work
. My opinion is that there should be a hiddenness for research
related works and the rest can be shared ,in this
essay I would like to explain my viewpoints.
Firstly
,there are many kinds of investigation works happening in each and every part of the world for the wellbeing of human beings itself. The effort each researcher put into his work
is limitless and hence
sharing vital information with the public may affect their work
if it is not completed.For example
,there are incidents reported by research
students like their work
was copied by others when they share it with their fellow beings .Hence
there must be a hiddenness in each and every research
work
before it submitting.
However
,the business and the academic world should share the facts and details with the society they are living ,since it will always motivate people in similar fields to job hard. Sharing the facts with the public help them to understand the challenges that their ancestors faced in the same path and help them to work
in that way as well. To site the best example during my engineering studies my senior students help me to learn to code easily and they guided me on how to approach the project.Hence
sharing information always guide others in the same field to think and act better.
To conclude, in some sectors the details of the work
must have secrecy at the same time some fields should share the knowledge with others for the betterment.Hence
sharing data should be according to the field in which you are working and the importance of that work
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite