Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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are aware that the

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can bring trouble and because of that, I agree with the statement. I agree with that statement because the

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, makes our

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become more focused on instant results rather than the effort that has to be made. Not only that but, it can

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be an urgent problem because of the damage to

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' mental

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.

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of all, the

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has a big role to make our

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more focused on instant results and often forget that there is always hard work and sacrifice.

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the job of a

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creator, we often forget that to just make one

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there are long processes that have to go through. Start from the most important step which is brainstorming and deciding the topic that has to relate to their audience so become more attractive and relatable. The

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step of course is the filming and

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editing, which can be very tricky because they have to attempt the meaning that they want to share is well delivered. No wonder, some

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say that being a

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creator means having to work 24 hours. Sadly, not many

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remember that long process that

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creators go through so they can easily judge and make fun of it.

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thing

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supported that many

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only share the good side on the

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despite what happened behind the scenes. That’s why slowly it makes our

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think that everything can be done in an instant.

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, the

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has adverse effects on

teenagers

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’ mental

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. Just like what was already mentioned before, on the

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people

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tend to only share the best version of everything.

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,

teenagers

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are a

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that is

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very familiar with technology ,especially the

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and because of ,that they become the most active users. Every day they are exposed to the

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from many

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and without realizing it makes them easily insecure. Sooner or later it can be damaging to their mental

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and can be a very serious problem. The most obvious impact is they can not be living fully and productive.

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, the phase of

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is very important and can be determinant to their long life.

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, the damage from the

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to

teenagers

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' mental

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is a very serious problem and can not be underestimated. To conclude, just because of the

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that many

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argue could bring up many benefits, we

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can not blindfold our eyes to the advantages. Many

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without realizing it can become victims of the

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starting from their mindset and mental

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.