Your Overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. • Thank him for the invitation & accept the invitation. • Write detail about your visit. • Briefly describe what you want to do there.

Hi Bob, Hope You're and your family doing well.
Firstly
, I'
m
delighted and writing to thank you a million for inviting me for a visit to your homeland Canada. I'd like to confirm that I accept your proposal because I'
m
free nowadays after my hectic exams.
in addition
, I'
m
already looking for visiting a country owing to exploring sightseeing and eye-catching views that would be fun and a source of comfy .you know that I'
m
a nature lover person. so that tour will be fabulous.
However
, I make a weekly plan I'd like to discuss with you about my arrival date and time and which airport I'
ll
be landing,
firstly
,I reserved my flight for 28th of March at morning 8 am via British airways and will be hit at Toronto airport.
as a result
, you'
ll
have to pick me up at the airport and that day I'd like to take a rest and the remaining days we'
ll
explore the fascinating parts of Canada.
Lastly
, I'd like to mention that I solely come for a visit so I need your ample time.
first
two days, I wanna see Niagara Falls and other monuments and landscapes and relish delicious cuisine
moreover
, for the day I wanna go to plenty of institutions in your country but
also
I will have a plan to get a master's degree from Toronto University. Bundles of thanks for your invitation once again and I'
ll
be there soon to catch up. Regards, Shaban Raza,
Submitted by Shabanraza489 on

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