Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is human nature that everyone wants

popularity

. Nowadays,

fame

totally depends upon digital or social

media

, and discussions on the

media

rotate around famous

people

's life. There are two points of view which are that extra privacy should be provided to the celebrities or

this

is the cost of their

fame

. If I would say

then

I stand with the

first

view which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, celebrities must have extra privacy as compared to a local person. They work hard in a specific field and achieve

fame

. Basically, their

fame

is due to the

media

platforms.

For instance

people

are familiar with Shahrukh Khan but most of them didn't know about his

son

. His

son

was arrested in a case and social

media

make

this

report trending news. As the result,

this

case is the base of his

son

popularity

In contrast

, it is true

this

was the reason for his

son

fame

but at the same ,time

people

were discussing Shahrukh and his family's matters.

In addition

, if the public is making someone popular on a specific post or video

then

they will

also

talk about his personal life and

this

is the cost of his

fame

For example

, a YouTuber created videos on Youtube.

People

watch his video and make him famous. If any scandal of that person leaked to the

media

then

the public will take

similarly

as they watched his videos.

Therefore

, we can say that

this

is a normal thing, if

people

participate in

popularity

then

they will be a part of his critical point. In my personal opinion, I support the

first

view that popular

people

should be treated as special and

also

there should be some rules and regulations on

media

about its posts, To conclude , both views are debatable that famous

people

must have some specific privacy concerns and

also

we can say that their private life discussions are the price of their

popularity

. But I think we should avoid talking about anyone's personal matters.

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