Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society ode. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are many types of
music
are being made nowadays. They have been developed by many instruments and they are being famous through internet
and apps. Some Correct article usage
the internet
people
say that songs
are only for entertained
, but Change the form of the verb
entertaining
the
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others
other
say they have Fix the agreement mistake
others
impact
on Add an article
an impact
the
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society
. Therefore
, I will explain this
question as follows.
First
, some people
say that music
is just a form of entertainment. In other words
, they think that song is for enjoying like TV
program. It can let Add an article
a TV
people
to
listen and enjoy it, but it cannot affect Change the verb form
apply
people
. Also
, the story of music
is commonly a
fiction like Correct article usage
apply
novels
. Fix the agreement mistake
novel
Thus
, they think the songs
are only a way for entertaining.
Second
, the
others think that Correct article usage
apply
music
has impact
on Add an article
an impact
society
. Each song has the
lyrics and Correct article usage
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the
stories which can win the sympathy Correct article usage
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from
the Change preposition
of
people
. Besides
this
, the messages of the music
are also
important to the
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apply
society
. They can be the message of the person who wrote the song to the community
. For example
, a
Remove the article
music
a piece of music
music
called ‘Tomboy’ is being famous now. The strong messages of ‘I believe myself’
, ‘We’re not done’ give Correct your spelling
myself
people
a strike and won the
sympathy Change the word
their
from
the Change preposition
of
people
. Therefore
, people
think that sounds have effect
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an effect
in
the Change preposition
on
community
.
In conclusion, I agree for
the Change preposition
with
second
opinion because I have seen much famous music
have impacted the
human Correct article usage
apply
society
. Sometimes the messages of songs
can change the community
. I also
have some music
that I get sympathy on
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for
it
. So, I think Correct pronoun usage
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songs
have effect
on the Add an article
an effect
community
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