Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

It is becoming more popular to move from smaller cities to bigger ones due to developments.

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trend can cause some

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for

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themselves and their nutrition.

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will discuss

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the problems and provide

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solutions.

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with, the

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amount of

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who leave villages means that

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labor

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force will decrease as well. All

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products

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including vegetables, fruits and others come to town all over from there, small towns need the

people

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to work

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deficit od products. Another problem is that all public

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will be crowded, constructors cannot handle

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of

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and built

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and facilities as much as

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needed. Individuals coming to the

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urban

create a problem for themselves. What can

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do

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that issues?

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of all, it is believed that working

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farm

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a farm

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and growing crops is low paid work, so government should realize it and

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their salary.

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will wile citizens to work there

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of moving.

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, to avoid overflow,

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should

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develop villages, and attractions there and make

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more comfortable. If residents of

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the countryside

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will earn as much as city dwellers and

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live as good as them, there would be no

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of leaving their hometown. In conclusion, everyone doing bad for themselves and others around

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thereby

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moving,

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everyone should understand it, especially

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. It needs only two things to stop that troubles, there are big earning for citizens of

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the countryside

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and building facilities for them too.