Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

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Most renowned persons may now be easily accessed by people of all ages, particularly
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, through various forms of
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. Their actions might have both beneficial and harmful consequences.
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, I partially agree that celebrities have a bad impact on
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, and I will explain why in
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with, because
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of the new generation primarily use
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to
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and relax, they are likely to encounter a large number of influencers in the online
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, who will attempt to persuade those innocent
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to follow their actions. Netflix's episodes,
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, contain numerous unpleasant languages and an unappreciated attitude that young people prefer to follow without understanding or conscience.
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, the mass
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has some advantages,
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as providing benefits
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as updating news, collecting important data, and providing a variety of learning resources.
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, if parents assist their young
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in selecting good role models in the
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, it will be beneficial to them as well as
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in inspiring them to pursue jobs that are interesting to them in the future.
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of
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figure in the education industry who published their
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experiences and
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techniques on social
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.
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,
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can use her platform to
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in a proper manner.
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, I would argue that celebrity coverage in the
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has both positive and negative consequences if
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receive good advice from their families.
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, not only should parents choose the best role model for their
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, but the
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as a whole should think about inappropriate content for
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on all platforms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Celebrity culture
  • Glamorization
  • Unrealistic expectations
  • Self-esteem
  • Scandals
  • Role models
  • Moral development
  • Mental health
  • Influence
  • Exposure
  • Social media platforms
  • Charity work
  • Inappropriate behavior
  • Perfection image
  • Negative impact
  • Inspire children
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