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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

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Most renowned persons may now be easily accessed by people of all ages, particularly
children
, through various forms of
media
. Their actions might have both beneficial and harmful consequences.
As a
result
, I partially agree that celebrities have a bad impact on
children
, and I will explain why in
subsequent
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 paragraph.
To begin
 with, because
children
 of the new generation primarily use
media
 to
study
 and relax, they are likely to encounter a large number of influencers in the online
media
, who will attempt to persuade those innocent
children
 to follow their actions. Netflix's episodes,
for example
, contain numerous unpleasant languages and an unappreciated attitude that young people prefer to follow without understanding or conscience.
However
, the mass
media
 has some advantages,
such
 as providing benefits
such
 as updating news, collecting important data, and providing a variety of learning resources.
As a
result
, if parents assist their young
child
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 in selecting good role models in the
media
, it will be beneficial to them as well as
children
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 in inspiring them to pursue jobs that are interesting to them in the future.
For example
, there is
number
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 of
well-known
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 figure in the education industry who published their
study
 experiences and
study
 techniques on social
media
.
As a
result
,
children
 can use her platform to
study
 in a proper manner.
Finally
, I would argue that celebrity coverage in the
media
 has both positive and negative consequences if
children
 receive good advice from their families.
As a
result
, not only should parents choose the best role model for their
children
, but the
media
 as a whole should think about inappropriate content for
children
 on all platforms.
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