It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports and music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become good sport person or musician. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.

People

who

was

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born with

talents

in something like playing

sport

or music can help them learn easier and they can achieve

the

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goal faster. On other hand, some children can be good at them if they have

learn

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since they

was

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childhood

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.

In the

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details of both views for

this

argument will be discussed in the following paragraphs. Regarding children have a good memory. Their brain

are

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fresh and can get

the

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information more than adults. They can learn and

practice

something easier. If

people

start to learn something like

sport

or music when they were children, they can be successful even though they do not have certain

talents

. The more they

practice

, the more they are a good player. Even though

people

who

practice

hard with

sport

or music without certain

talents

,

they

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can have achievement but it takes more

time

than

people

who have

talents

.

People

with

talents

are more

advantage

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.

People

with talent can be easier to learn and do not need to

practice

so much

comparing

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between

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to

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people

who do not have it

with

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same

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age and

same

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the same

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time

.

People

without

talents

must be so tried and takes

a

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such

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much

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more

time

to be successful. In conclusion, everyone can be good

in

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something without certain

for example

a good

sport

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sports

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player or musician but they need more

practicing

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and take more

time

than

people

who have

certain

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talent

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talents

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.

Moreover

, despite

of

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achievement with

sport

or

musir

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music

or other, they must love to do it and they pay attention

with

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it.