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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In you letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which courses you want to teach, and what they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir or Madam,
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 is Isa Azim. I am writing
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 letter to the community college to acquire some information about your advertisement.
Last
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 day, 22nd of September, I saw an announcement in the newspaper that your college is searching for teachers who can arrange the night classes. Actually, I graduated with a master's degree in appliance chemistry and a Ph.D. candidate in the same speciality at Oxford University. I noticed some courses have been offered in my field of study.
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, chemistry one and two, medicine ingredients, materials and chemical compounds.
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, I really have a passion for training and struggling with students. It will enhance my knowledge
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, make a good resume for my future career.
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, I need some extra income except for my university scholarship and it would be a great opportunity if the job is related to my degree. In my opinion, I would be appropriate for
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 job provided the fact that it is absolutely connected to my current study.
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, my professors can admit my competence as well. I appreciate your attention. My contact number and email address are attached to the letter. Do not hesitate to contact me at any time in advance. I am waiting to hear from you. Yours sincerely Isa Azim

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task achievement
Ensure that your introduction clearly states the purpose of the letter and responds directly to the advertisement you are referring to. Your letter should start with a direct answer to the advertisement to establish relevance and context.
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Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter, suitable for the context of a job application. Avoid using informal expressions or phrases that could detract from the professional nature of the correspondence.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each containing a single central idea, to improve the logical flow of content. Each paragraph should have a clear topic sentence and subsequent sentences that expand on that idea.
coherence and cohesion
Use cohesive devices effectively to link sentences and paragraphs, ensuring logical flow and connection of ideas for the reader. Avoid overuse or incorrect use of linking words, which can lead to confusion.
coherence and cohesion
Conclude your letter with a formal closing that is consistent with the tone of the rest of the letter. Ensure the closing is appropriately worded to signal the end of the correspondence and includes an appropriate sign-off.
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