Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? high tuition fees supporting family What solutions can you suggest? grants , scholarships , apply for less courses in each semester

the issue of working and studying at the same has been

widly

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widely

wildly

depated

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departed

debated

. while some hold the view that it's important to be independent and be

incharge

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in charge

of your own expenses while studying , others believe that it can badly affect the

students

' academic achievements . I believe that a student should focus on one purpose and do the best they can in it .

to begin

with , studying takes

alot

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a lot

of effort and time

however

,

students

still

work

beside studying . As for many despite the fact that they got the score to be a part of the university ,they still need

a high tuition fees

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a high tuition fee

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to pay .

For example

,

students

who are in medical school usually have numerous exams and stress but

still

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work

to pay the fees and sometimes

supporting

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support

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their

family

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families

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.What can be said is getting a

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bachelor

bacholer

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bacholer's

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degree can be a struggle to some .

moreover

, solutions have to take place as soon as possible to give the space for

students

to study efficiently ,

students

of today are the professionals of tomorrow

therefore

, we need to

facillitate

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facilitate

their life so that they can study harder and be better in their fields .

this

can be done by giving grants and scholarships

for

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to

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students

in need so they can drop the idea of studying

beside

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work

. A prime example is giving some

students

an exemption on fees loans .

hence

,

this

will make

students

focus more on their studies . in conclusion , It can be reiterated that studying is more pivotal than working as society needs better professionals . Not only does

work

take up most of the time , but

also

use effort as well . so society and the government should reduce the burden on

students

by helping them through their years of study .