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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#schools
In
this
 generation bullying is a big
problem
 in many schools. and it increases with time and it becomes a big
problem
 nowadays. and we think about how to control it before its overcome. bullying is a big
problem
 in many schools it's because of the
parents
 and their environment.
this
also
 shows their parent's nature too. that how they behave with
others
 and her
behavior
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behaviour
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 affect her child and he starts behaving
similar
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similarly
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 with
others
. and the other reason is their friend
circle
 it
also
 depends on the child in which
circle
 he/she will. we can solve the
problem
 by giving them good advice and a good friend
circle
, and their
parents
also
 have to see
towards
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apply
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them that's how they behave
others
 in front of them and take care of them
with
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in
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good
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a good
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 environment and give them
best
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the best
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 lifestyle advice, how to talk with
others
 and how to behave with other with their friends or seniors.
secondly
, our institution has to focus on students that they are not in bad company,
and
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provide them
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with a
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a good habit classes
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a good habit class
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 once
in
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a week, and tell them their mistakes.
this
 is the best way to focus on the students. In conclusion, the institution and their
parents
 have the main role in
this
. they don't support their child on wrong
thing
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things
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 they have to tell them
that
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what
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you
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they
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 have done wrong and
you
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they
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 don't have to do
this
 again
otherwise
, you get punished by
their
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your
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parents
 or teacher. and institutions have to focus on their friend
circle
 in school and
parents
 at home.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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