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- Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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With the increase in ,
technology
 every sector in the nation uses the
technology
.Nowadays
computers
 are one of the biggest essential and play a prominent role.
Computers
 are becoming an essential part of school education
this
 can have a lot of pros and cons .I will discuss and give my opinion in the below paragraphs. There are a lot of advantages to using the computer in the schooling system.Which can help the
students
 to take class efficiently and easily.For ,instance if the student misses the class they can record it and listen to the lesson at any time.Nowadays most of the education system runs using
computers
.
Although
 there are so many advantages to having
computers
 still they have some disadvantages to using
computers
 in classrooms,IN some cases
students
 need personal guidance who taught them the lessons very carefully.Some
students
 need motivation in order to get a good score on tests ,they need some motivation to encourage them it cannot be possible if classes taking on
computers
.According to the survey ,
students
 who are encouraged by teachers are getting good scores on exams when compared to
students
 who took classes online
also
students
 need discipline it can be possible if teachers are present in the classroom. In conclusion, there are some advantages and disadvantages if the
computers
 are took place of the school staff.in my opinion if the classroom becomes
computers
 they cannot learn discipline and moral values in society.With the increase in ,
technology
 every sector in the nation uses the
technology
.Nowadays
computers
 are one of the biggest essential and play a prominent role
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Edutainment
  • Multimedia resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Digital literacy
  • Cyberbullying
  • Ergonomic hazards
  • Cognitive overload
  • Technological proficiency
  • Blended learning environments
  • Instructional technology
  • Adaptive software
  • Screen time management
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