some people think that university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss noth these views and give your own opinion.

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Choosing a suitable field for

higher-education

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is a debating topic for

students

. Some

people

believe that

studing

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studying

more useful subjects,

such

as those are related to technology is an efficient idea for

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society while others encourage pupils to follow whatever they like in future. In my opinion, the latter idea is more logical.

Firstly

, the

neccessary

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necessary

need for technology's development is

undyniable

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undeniable

thus

any country

need

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some experts in those fields.

For instance

, many universities in developed countries, like America, have different policies for getting international

students

in order to

inhance

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enhance

knowledge

which

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is related to science. One of the common policies is scholarship. Training more

students

sience

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science

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-related subjects would increase the growth of innovation and it would be helpful for any community. All in all,

government

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can help

educational

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the educational

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system to help gifted

people

to boost the total technological knowledge of

country

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. On the other side, there is a fact that

people

are more successful in those fields that they are passionate about them.

For example

, when pupils are not interested in a specific field, they do not try enough.

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, they are reluctant to

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. To summarise,

up-to-dated

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technology is needed but putting

people

under the pressure to do something which they do not enjoy

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, is not an efficient way. Giving grants to international

students

or sending talented

students

to study abroad can be a suggestion for

this

issue.

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2Word repetition
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some people think that university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss noth these views and give your own opinion.

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