Education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education has become an important issue for
governments
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. While it is a priority to educate youth, in my opinion, teaching
adults
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is equally crucial and I agree that
governments
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should invest in
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. education youngsters would directly affect a country's development. They are the population who should bring a prosperous future to their nation. They are likely to have unique ideas that could revolutionize human life, but without learning state-of-the-art knowledge that would be impossible.
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, technological advancement, especially in the field of artificial intelligence, could not be achieved if people were not literate.
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, more progress and development may only be feasible if
governments
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prioritize educating young
adults
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.
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, I believe that literacy is vital for everyone in society, including
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.
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, they are role models for children and youth. If they are not educated, they probably could not bring a literate generation and
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possibly has a negative impact on the nation's future.
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, literacy is an aspect
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considered as a development of a country. Since
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contribute a high percentage of the population, the nation will not be considered a developed and educated one if
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majority is not taught.
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, they need to be literate to live in the modern world, where everything is dependent on technology and human-machine interaction. In conclusion, it is fundamental to have a majority of well-educated individuals in society and
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should not only concern with young people's education but
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allocate a specific budget to literate
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who still cannot even read and write. It seems to me that these two groups are equally important to be educated.
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