Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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TECHNOLOGICAL DEVICES HAVE BEEN ENTRANCED EVERY FIELD OF LIFE. IN RECENT YEARS, SOME

PEOPLE

HAVE BEEN ARGUING THAT

THIS

CHANGE HAS A DETRIMENTAL EFFECT ON

PEOPLE

'S FAMILY AND SOCIAL LIVES BASED ON THEIR PREFERENCE OF WATCHING TELEVISION

INSTEAD

OF SPENDING TIME WITH OTHER

PEOPLE

. I TOTALLY DISAGREE WITH

THIS

STATEMENT AND

THIS

ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN HOW

SHOWS CAN ENHANCE

PEOPLE

RELATIONS.

FIRSTLY

, WATCHING

SHOULD BE SEEN AS A TOOL TO COMMUNICATE WITH

PEOPLE

AROUND

INSTEAD

OF A DISTRACTER. TO ILLUSTRATE, AROUND THREE YEARS AGO, THERE WAS A

SHOW

WHICH STRENGTHENED THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN ME AND MY FATHER WHOSE INTERESTS DIDN'T SEEM ATTRACTIVE TO ME UNTIL THAT

SHOW

MOREOVER

, TALKING ABOUT THE

SHOW

WEEKLY-BASIS BECAME OUR LITTLE TRADITION. SO IT WAS A BONDING AGENT FOR US.

SECONDLY

SHOWS CAN EASE SOCIALISING FOR INTROVERTED

PEOPLE

FOR INSTANCE

, THERE HAS BEEN DOING SOME SPECIAL OCCASIONS

SUCH

AS THE OFFICE PUB QUIZ AND IT HELPS

PEOPLE

SHARING SAME INTERESTS TO MEET. WHEN I MOVED TO ISTANBUL, I DIDN'T KNOW ANYONE AND CHECKED A PUB QUIZ FOR THE OFFICE AND LUCKILY I GAINED A LITTLE FRIEND GROUP FROM THAT EVENT. NEEDLESS TO SAY, IF THERE WAS NO

SUCH

SHOW

, WE WOULDN'T FIND EACH OTHER. TO SUM UP, WATCHING

CAN HELP

PEOPLE

TO CONNECT AND MEET OTHERS SHARING THE SAME INTERESTS AS OPPOSED TO NEGATIVE ASSUMPTIONS.

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Topic: Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city.

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