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The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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From old age to the modern era, there has been development in civilisation due to the development of new techniques and innovative technology in day today`s life. Globalisation had a great impact on bringing
world
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 together . Some might have been thinking it has destroyed
culture
 and gone into extinction.In
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 disagree
the
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 fact and give my views about the positive effects on
culture
 due to capitalism. Multiculturalism,
as a result
 of globalism, has connected all parts of
world
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 to a single market entity.
For instance
 , Tourism not only familiarise other people`s
culture
 but
also
 increase economic transaction across the
world
. When tourists visit a place ,They got attracted to their cuisine and brought their food
culture
 to their own country.
therefore
 , They could have a global market for their economy. Communication and transportation have a vital role in connecting manhood throughout the planet. Internet and social media shares major
culture
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 aspects and talents across the
world
. As a
proof
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 people like to wear different clothes around the globe and like to share their traditions with others.
This
 makes people united and friendly
through
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participating in
the
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cultural transactions. As a consequence ,
this
 leads to
good
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relationship
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 in the
world
. To conclude, globalisation had not affected the extinction of
culture
 but resulted in the development of cultural prospects among the nations.It paved the way to adopt others'
culture
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cultures
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 to suit their needs
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