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Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (250 words).

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Nowadays, there are a large number of songs created by artists. Some
people
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 argue that melody is just a kind of entertaining tool, while others believe that melodies have a greater significance to their
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. I hold the opinion that the functionality of singing totally depends on individuals’ preferences.
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 with, there is no doubt that
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 is inevitable in someone’s life.
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, some
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 would like to
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 some classical songs to let themselves calm down and feel peaceful in the evening, which helps them to fall asleep quickly.
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, it plays a crucial part to some individuals when doing the exercise in the gym since accompanied with some catchy rhythms makes them feel energetic and can totally immerse in their own world.
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, these
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 believe that
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 is playing a key role in their lives.
On the other hand
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, melodies are just a type of entertaining tool to some
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. They only use them while doing some relaxing things.
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, some
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 may think that it would be better to have
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 when taking a party with their friends, which benefits building a warm atmosphere.
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, they suppose that they can live comfortably even though there is no melody in their life. In conclusion, I believe that the importance of
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 in
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’s life is totally decided by their preferences.
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music
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 has much more meaning than itself to some
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 and benefits their lives a lot, others may just consider it as a good way to have fun.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Escapism
  • 2. Social gatherings
  • 3. Cultural heritage
  • 4. Traditions
  • 5. Social change
  • 6. Political expression
  • 7. Awareness
  • 8. Community
  • 9. Belonging
  • 10. Therapeutic benefits
  • 11. Mental health
  • 12. Emotional expression
  • 13. Cognitive performance
  • 14. Concentration
  • 15. Memory
  • 16. Productivity
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