There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe the importance of the park • Say what action you will take if the council continues with this plan
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with planning to sell the public
park
on Ray street
. I am one of the people whose home is in the vicinity of the Capitalize word
Street
park
. I have been living in this
place
since 1997. I am an engineer and I have two daughters who play in that park
on a regular basis. From social, environmental and cultural prospects It park
is a special place
for our neighbors
and Change the spelling
neighbours
this
neighbourhood.
Given the fact that this
park
is located in a lively and upbeat atmosphere and offers a wide variety of recreational facilities. Most families in this
neighborhood
benefit from some playing facilities Change the spelling
neighbourhood
such
as swings and the ball pool, two tennis court
and the library in Fix the agreement mistake
courts
this
park
. In addition
, this
park
provides a place
for unwinding and escaping from the hustle and bustle of city life.
Finally
, Because of the importance of this
place
, if the council continue this
plan, all of our neighbours and I will rebel against this
intention. We will write a complication about this
decision to the governments and start a petition.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Mahshid KargarrSubmitted by kargar.mh1992 on
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grammar
There are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that could be improved. For example, 'social, environmental and cultural prospects It park' can be revised to 'From social, environmental, and cultural perspectives, the park is a special place for our community.'
clarity
Try to avoid redundancy. For instance, 'Finally, Because of the importance of this place, if the council continue this plan, all of our neighbours and I will rebel against this intention' can be made more concise.
organization
The letter is well-organized, with each paragraph addressing a specific point from the prompt (introduction, importance of the park, and intended actions).
tone
You maintained a polite and formal tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.
task completion
The letter covers all points required by the prompt effectively and gives clear, logical reasons for your stance.