Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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governments must have well-organized future plans in order to achieve public well-being and overall communities welfare. Many nations set

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economic growth as a priority, while others see that there are additional measures that are

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the economy. The advancement of

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is the key

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success in an environment, according to some. They consider the financial

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as a compulsory part

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all of life's aspects.

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, the living conditions of citizens

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government should be financially stable.

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, the employment rate can be reduced by creating construction projects.

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, if the cost of living

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, the crime rate will undoubtedly be decreased.

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, people take into consideration the economic progress as well as other measures like the freedom of speech, or the pure of the election process In my

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, regimes should deem the free press as an indication of their

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to progress. To clarify the effect of these measures, you can indicate them as having an

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effect on the economy, which in turn, can improve the nation's progress economically. In conclusion,

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nations with booming economic conditions make the public happier. There are other parameters

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a major role in their proper achievements,

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, the availability of free health insurance, good conditions of education, etc.

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, I wholeheartedly believe that focusing on the improvements of existing laws, and rectifying the

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have a good impact on

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the population

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