When a country develops its technology, the traditional skils and ways of life die out. It is pontless to try and keep them alive. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
There is no doubt that the development of
technology
is highly important for every country now. However
, some people
say that it leads to the destruction of traditional lifestyles and skills. In my opinion, technology
improves our way of living, but cannot completely destroy traditional skills and way of life
.
We live in a world in which modern technologies are used popularly in different spheres like medicine, building, transportation and many others. Its development is mainly aimed to make
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at making
day to day
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day-to-day
life
more convenient as modern life
is extremely fast and people
may not have time for some simple tasks. For example
, robots, vacuuming the floor, are really popular nowadays. Moreover
, robots are commonly used by companies as they tend to produce products faster than people
, though, they are controlled by folks.
On the other hand
, there are a number of communities that do not introduce technology
into their life
, hence
, saving their conservative lifestyle. They also
live isolated and usually do not communicate a lot with others. At the same time, with technological progress, traditional skills such
as carving or painting became more valuable. In fact, people
prefer to spend more on crafts that were made by hand, especially if it is related to their traditions and culture.
In conclusion, it is clear that
the development of technology
and the increase in its use in all spheres has an influence on our lifestyle. Nevertheless
, some people
still prefer the conservative kind of life
and traditional handicrafts are highly valued by modern society.Submitted by tn.trannhan68 on
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