Many museums charge people for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Countless
museums
require a fee in order to allow Use synonyms
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on the other hand
, others do not ask for that. Linking Words
This
essay will prove why benefits including having a source of income to be self-sustaining overshadow drawbacks like loss of interest by Linking Words
people
.
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Museums
are vital in society because they bring history to the present, Use synonyms
however
, for them to remain functional, they need regular funding. Linking Words
This
can only be obtained through small commissions that could be availed through gate fees. Linking Words
For instance
, many archaeologists experience a lot of difficulties and hurdles in their quests to acquire all the antiques that are displayed in the historic halls. Linking Words
Hence
, for these expenses to be covered money is needed of which the easiest source is via payments on admission. Linking Words
This
is the positive aspect of charging and the reason why it is better than any negatives that may result.
Despite that being the case, there are some disadvantages like the loss of interest in Linking Words
museums
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people
. To put Use synonyms
this
in perspective, when individuals know that they are expected to make some form of payment in order to enter Linking Words
such
a hall, they eventually want nothing to do with them. Take, Linking Words
for example
, in a survey conducted on the effects of payments on Linking Words
people
's attitudes, it was determined that the number of attendees reduced significantly due to little or no drive from Use synonyms
people
to pay the fees. Gladly, Use synonyms
such
challenges can be overcome by allowing Linking Words
people
to make discounted payments in instalments.
By way of conclusion, even though some Use synonyms
people
might become apathetic at visiting Use synonyms
museums
due to the fact that they have to pay in order to enjoy its services, paying actually helps these facilities to remain self-reliant financially. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I believe that the advantages outweigh any disadvantages.Linking Words
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