Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Some people consider that the

government

spends a large amount of money on the

arts

instead

of investing it

to

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projects

that are more important. In my opinion, the

government

should not reduce expenditure on the

arts

but it ought to

also

allocate other

projects

as well. One plus point to

invest

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in the

arts

is

that

is

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it

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express our culture to foreigners. If the

government

does not spend money on the

arts

, foreign travellers would not know much about the culture of the country.

In addition

,

lack

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of funding for the

arts

would result in jobless which will lead to economic instability. Because

human

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humans

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working in the

arts

industry

have

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qulification

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qualification

in their own field, they will find it difficult to secure a job in another sector. Admittedly,

state

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the state

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budget

shoud

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should

be spent on

the

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other remarkable

projects

such

as medicine, education, public transportation, etc but not at the expense of the

arts

. These

projects

have their own significance and investing

them

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is the state’s responsibility, but

this

does not mean the

gorvernment

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government

should stop funding one sector to allocate

budget

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the budget

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to the other.

For example

, improving the quality of healthcare and education or building new hospitals and educational institutions ensures

the

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a

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health

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and educated society. In the nutshell, neglecting the

arts

industry and spending money on the other project is not an

effect

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effective

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solution. The

government

should fund other sectors,

but

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not only

for

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the

arts

.