Large number of deaths are caused by road accidents. Why do so many road accidents occur? Make recommendations that would help to reduce their number.

Nowadays, transports are an indispensable part of human life. As a

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lose

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their life while on the

road

.

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causes of

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to be focused on some areas, and a number of solutions

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appear to be possible. Perhaps the major factor is roles

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from

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the

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such

as wearing seat belts, speeding, and stopping the traffic lights

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consequence

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an accident can occur as well as cause

people

to die.

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causes

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is

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poor conditions and lack of

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law

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enforcement and inadequate public education on

this

issue

road

. In many

places

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the condition of the

roads

is not good and young

people

usually do not study the

road

roles but they know to drive the vehicles and it is not only dangerous for the driver

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also

harmful for other

people

on the roadway. Turning to possible solutions an obvious step would be government must implement stern action against

people

going against

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are

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accidents

, they pay many

penalty

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are took

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away

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driver's license by

police

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then

the number of

accidents

are way reduce

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. A

second

remedy might be to decline the

amount

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of

accidents

are to

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and

reshape

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poor

roads

. According to statistics, 50

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of

road

accidents

are caused by the condition of the

roads

not meeting the demand so

roads

need to be repaired In summary, the factors of

road

conditions and poor education system appear to be the main causes. A coordinated response to

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increase

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in fines by the government and

road

conditions may lessen the severity of the situation.