The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the excessive amount of

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usage is being experienced which leads to traffic congestion and an alarming level of pollution. I strongly agree that different means of transit should be stimulated

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implementing new international rules due to

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private vehicle possession and usage.

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, people especially who live in big cities suffer from heavy traffic on roads which can be inexorably linked to the overwhelmingly high level of

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usage. According to the

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, almost every family owns a

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, sometimes two private cars can be observed per family in urbanized cities

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as London and Istanbul. As a consequence of

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propensity, long tailbacks can not be avoidable during rush hours. Encouraging alternative modes of

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has the potential to ease the sum of cars on roads.

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, the level of private automobile dependence is increasing day by day which can

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lead to several global

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as

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pollution. To put it simply, the emissions and fumes of vehicles cause

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kind of severe problem as recent research

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shown. It is widely accepted that one of the dominant sources of air pollutants

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vehicle emissions, particularly in developing cities, and the increasing severity and duration of

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congestion have the potential to greatly increase pollutant emissions and degrade atmosphere quality. In terms of managing the increasing sum of

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possession government should impose new rules, like increasing taxes on

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ownership and preventing the number of cars per family.

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, if these sorts of implementations could be accompanied by stimulating different forms of

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namely trams, trains and bikes,

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would handle the severe dilemma which

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already been mentioned above. In conclusion,

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of the growing number of vehicles on roads, transit congestion and breeze contamination

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increasing respectively. It seems logical that alternative transportation and regulatory laws should be motivated to tackle

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possession related

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