Some say that young people should take a break between school and university to go travelling and learn more about the world. Others say that it is better for them to go straight to university from school, and then go travelling when they have finished their studies. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In recent years it is becoming more popular among young
people
to take a gap
year
between school and
university
instead
of going straight to
university
until the end of studies. During
this
gap
year
,
people
can go travelling, learn about the
world
around them and decide which role in
this
world
they would like to take. On the one hand, there is a number of advantages and opportunities to taking a break between studies.
First
of all, the ability to travel is a great opportunity for
people
in their youth. Obviously,
people
can’t stay in luxury hotels, eat in expensive restaurants and use high-quality services when they are only 18 years old,
however
, they can see the
world
around them with enormous amazing places with breathtaking views that everyone has to visit one day in their life, make connections with
people
from different nations and learn their cultures.
Moreover
, during
this
period of time
people
will have a chance to learn more about themselves and their place in
this
world
.
For instance
, some
people
can find out that they are into helping others and decide to become a doctor or join some volunteer organisations in the future.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks.
Firstly
,
this
year
of freedom can distract a young person so much that they will lose their urge to go to
university
at all.
Nonetheless
, I believe that being educated is very important for everyone in the modern
world
and
this
decision could be a vital mistake.
In addition
, I suppose that in many families parents will argue the decision to take a gap
year
and most likely won’t support it.
For example
, it is more adequate to save money for future studies than to spend it on travelling around the
world
for the whole
year
. In conclusion, there is a number of both advantages and disadvantages to taking a break between school and
university
.
Nevertheless
, I believe that despite the drawbacks it is a great chance to learn more about the
world
and yourself, and if I had
this
chance in my youth I would definitely take it.
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