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What are the advantages and disadvantages of young people doing volunteer work?

#people #volunteer #work
Volunteering has become very popular these days, especially among students and young
people
. There are lots of programs that help to start being a volunteer, and on another side, there are lots of events where the organization needs some help. Volunteering is always an act of kindness, it’s about taking your spare time, money and helping those in need. I’d like to review what other problems can be solved in case of
this
 popularity of volunteering.
First
 of all, a large number of volunteers makes the world a better place.
People
 help other
people
 selflessly, support a person or a whole community in difficult times or become responsible for the organization of something. Without volunteers, many things couldn’t exist.
Secondly
, being a volunteer you can learn many things which could be useful in life and make you better
such
 as gratitude, passion, creativity, efficiency, courage and leadership skills. You’ll be full of positive energy. Some
people
 who are engaged in volunteering programs believe that volunteerism makes them stronger professionals in their main field of activity.
In addition
, volunteering can be really interesting, useful and even fascinating for students and other
people
 because it is a chance to be a part of an event where you couldn’t get any other way or meet some interesting
people
 or become a part of special communities. Very often
people
 want to do something, but they don’t know where to go. The popularity of volunteering makes it accessible and easy to take part in for everybody. As for me, I’ve never been a volunteer anywhere, I’m always busy with something else. Despite
this
, I think that volunteering could be really helpful and interesting, I wish to try it one day and probably will
enjoy
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. In conclusion, I believe that volunteering is always a solution, its popularity of it helps to involve more
people
 (even me someday) and
as a result
 makes the world better.
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