A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves - say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her - explain how to apply for the job

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Dear Ama, I am writing to inform you about a skincare formulator job offer at Surfline company heard of a few days ago. The appointment is about helping clients know their skin type,assisting in the formulations of various

skincare

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products and

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sorting out and researching new skincare products.With reference to the

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apply

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letter I believe

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appointment will the suitable for you since you studied skin science in your undergraduate programme not long ago ,In ,addition

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appointment doesn't require any experience,they only need fresh graduates. In order to apply, send a copy of your CV and cover letter to [email protected] ,Don't forget to reference your document too. I wish you all the best. With love, Kiki

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

120 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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reputation
industry
duties and responsibilities
typical day
skills and experiences
job requirements
company culture
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application process
job listing
submit an application
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: ● apologize for being late in returning the money ● explain what happened ● say how you are going to fix the issue now

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