Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. Do you agree or disagree.

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EDUCATION ENHANCES STUDENTS' SOCIAL SKILLS

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SCIENCE KNOWLEDGE. NOWADAYS, SOME

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ARGUE THAT METHODS AND TRICKS FOR GIVING A FLUENT SPEECH IN FRONT OF THE PUBLIC SHOULD BE ADDED TO THE CURRICULUM. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH

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STATEMENT AND

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ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN WHY

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SKILL

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IS IMPORTANT IN OUR LIVES AND SHOULD BE TAUGHT WHEN WE ARE YOUNG.

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, IT HELPS

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TO EXPRESS THEMSELVES ACCURATELY IN FRONT OF

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AS A MEETING OR CLASSROOM AND

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IS A CRUCIAL

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FOR ADULT LIFE BECAUSE

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SOMEHOW HAVE TO DEFEND THEIR RIGHTS. TO ILLUSTRATE,

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HAVING CONCERNS ABOUT PUBLIC SPEECH COULDN'T PUT THEIR FOOT IN THE DOOR

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A MEETING ABOUT THEIR SALARY AND

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, THEY WOULDN'T EARN THE MONEY THAT THEY DESERVE.

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ANOTHER THING ABOUT

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, IT PREVENTS

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FROM

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IRREVERSIBLE MISTAKES THAT

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AS A RESULT

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OF EXCITEMENT. EXCITING

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TEND TO DO A LOT OF MISTAKES WHEN THEY HAVE TO SPEAK IN PUBLIC. BUT IF THEY HAVE BEEN EDUCATED ON

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AT AN EARLY AGE, HARMFUL MISTAKES CAN BE PREVENTED IN THEIR ADULT LIVES. TO ILLUSTRATE, AS

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HUMAN NATURE,

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HAVE A TENDENCY TO BE IMPULSIVE WHEN THEY GET NERVOUS.

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EXPRESSING THEMSELVES CAN BE INEVITABLE IN AN INAPPROPRIATE WAY AND

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WAY CAN HAVE DETRIMENTAL

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UNCORRECTABLE EFFECTS ON THEIR PROFESSIONAL LIVES.

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, GIVING A SPEECH WITH

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ACCURATE WORDS AND WITHOUT EXCITEMENT IS A LEARNABLE

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AND

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SHOULD BE LEARNT AT SCHOOLS AT AN EARLY AGE AS AN OBLIGATION.

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Consider organizing your essay into well-defined paragraphs for each main point. This will help improve the logical flow and coherence. For instance, breaking down your points into clear sections can make it easier for the reader to follow your argument.

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Make sure to clarify your ideas and arguments a bit more. They seem to be clear in your mind, but more detailed explanation can help convey your points more effectively.

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Try to include more detailed examples that are relevant and specific to strengthen your arguments. This will help in making your essay more compelling and convincing.

introduction conclusion present

The introduction effectively sets the stage for your argument and clearly presents your viewpoint.

logical structure

You have highlighted important aspects of public speaking, expressing why it should be a part of education.

introduction conclusion present

The conclusion nicely wraps up your main points and reinforces your agreement with the thesis.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

256 words

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