Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?
In recent years, much scientific research illustrates that many
species
are disappearing, and some scientists
even point out that it is a threat to the earth. Then
, why does it happen? And how can we resolve the problem? In the following, I will present my view and recommendations.
I argue that one crucial reason for the mentioned phenomenon is the fast development of human cities
. Thousands of years ago, the boundary between human beings
and animals
was not clear. Human beings
were living in the forest
as well as animals
. Yet, human beings
started to leave the forest
and built cities
only for the same kinds. And in the last
few decades, there has been an exponential growth of human cities
which requires more and more land. Hence
, human beings
not just left the forest
but also
destroyed the forest
, which is the home of many animals
. Once these animals
lost their home, they found it hard to survive, given that they no longer had a place to sleep and get food. A classic example is Chinese pandas. In the last
few decades, they have been in trouble and have become almost extinct species
.
I propose several ways to address the issue. The first
suggestion is to governments. I agree that cities
' development is necessary. Yet, governments should have a better policy for their cities
' growth. They should avoid the overdevelopment of cities
and formulate laws to protect the living places of animals
. The second
suggestion is to scientists
. They should collect DNA sequences of various species
of animals
as soon as possible, especially for those who are almost extinct. In this
way, scientists
may adopt a de-extinction project in the future when the technology is available. The third
suggestion is for individuals. Though the power of individuals is limited, I think each of us should at least realize the importance of the diversity of species
. We should keep the motivation to protect other species
and not destroy their living places.
In short, I argue that many species
are disappearing because of the dramatic growth of human cities
in the last
few decades. This
human activity destroyed many animals
' living places. Accordingly
, I suggest a few methods to governments, scientists
, and individuals, respectively, to solve the problem.Submitted by wing3602000 on
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