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There is less communication between family members. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

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Interaction between family members has become low.I completely agree with the above statement.In
this
 essay,I will express my views.
Firstly
,the introduction of smartphones made every individual less sociable and lazy.Because the family members spend most of their
time
 on smartphones for entertainment.
As a result
,they don't have proper
time
 to interact with their family fellows.
For example
,the research conducted in the USA showed that people become less interactive with their fellow beings after the introduction of mobile devices
Secondly
,due to modern,lifestyles humans have less
time
 to spend their
time
 with their families.Owing the fact humankind have more working hours and have fewer holidays make them spend little
time
 with their family which,accounts for less communication between family.
For instance
,the survey conducted at a university showed that because of less
time
 spent between the families they less interaction between family members. In conclusion,due to the introduction of electronic gadgets and the modern ,era people become less interactive with their families.So,I agree with the above-mentioned statement.
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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