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Some people think computers and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers.

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It is irrefutable that computers overweight books today and some people believe that modern technology and e-learning are essential parts of children’s
education
 while others presume that traditional learning is more effective. I think both ways of learning are important in modern
education
 and they are complementary to each other.
This
 essay will describe the advantages and disadvantages of e-learning and traditional
education
 and will draw up conclusions. If we start with the strengths of e-learning in a child's
education
, it is obvious that in modern life, gadgets and other tools are necessary components of the
education
 process.
For example
, students can use e-books effectively and it saves a lot of time and makes the learning process easier now.
However
, two decades ago, we were supposed to use hard copies of books and it took a long time to search and find out specific information. I believe that the only disadvantage of online learning is that it is unhealthy for our eyesight. In terms of traditional
education
, there are several advantages as well.
For instance
, teachers can navigate students
in particular
 tasks and have better control of the learning process.
Actually
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 there are many advantages that we can not see,
for example
,with a teacher you will have exact graphics of your lessons,and it is good for the quality of learning. By the way,I should say that both ways are good.
Although
 it depends on the person.If a human needs knowledge so for him it doesn't matter by which method he will learn.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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