As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you think the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In economically developed countries,

car

sales are increasing day by day. Most people want to ride their individual

cars

. There are some advantages for

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while harmfulness effect on the environment is

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than personal comfort. It is clear that in the back

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car

is often on a significant needing list. Public transports

such

as subways or buses are sometimes unavailable, crowded and take more time during a vacation.

In addition

, nobody wants to travel with her baby, and kids on a bus for hygiene issues in the community. Due to the fact that

car

sales peak among families

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a newborn. In doubtless, buying a

car

is necessary when we think about comfortable transport

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for family with children.

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car

in these countries would be a detrimental effect on our children in the future. If we think about our future not only for children but

also

for the Earth, we prefer using public transport mostly.

On the other hand

, environmental issues are getting the rise all around the world, especially in developed countries. One of the reasons for

this

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is the

cars

. They release emission gases and other dangerous gases. All these industrial pollutants are delivered to the atmosphere. The people who are exposed to it, can catcher breathing or other health problems.

For instance

, breathing diseases are common in developed economies. The environmental harmful effect of

cars

can not ignore. In conclusion, being comfortable with using the

car

is not as

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significant being healthy. Every government should be conscious of decreasing sales of

cars

and they encourage society to prefer using public transport.