Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that a significant number of

people

use

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electronic

devices

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with others.

However

, some assert that using those

devices

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the ability

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the interaction in person. Regarding

this

, I strongly disagree with

this

assertion as I believe individuals can even increase

communication

skills

through the

devices

.

To begin

with,

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people

can practice socialization with the Internet by using mobile phones and

computers

. As some

people

are too shy to have a conversation

face

to

face

, they tend to easily give up to interact with others. In

this

regard, having conversations online can be a key factor in increasing

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specialized

socialized

skills

.

For example

, a survey conducted by the Korea Psychology Foundation has revealed that

computers

are used

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introversive kids.

As a result

, almost 30% of them have

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overcome

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their passive personalities. As the example clearly illustrates, it is a good idea to use electronic apparatus to enhance socialized

communication

skills

. In

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addition

, individuals can acquire other languages through the Internet with electronic gadgets since they can meet many nationalities from various countries

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virtual conferencing and international classes remotely.

For instance

, recent media in Korea reports that the majority of language schools provide online classes in Canada.

Therefore

, a significant number of students learn other cultures and languages through the classes, Thereby leading to an improvement

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communication

skills

which facilitates having a conversation

face

to

face

with foreigners.

Hence

, it is reasonable to point out that using electronic

devices

can be a stepping stone to

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with

people

over the world. In conclusion, while some are concerned about using

computers

as it disrupts real

communication

face

to

face

, I would point out that

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even useful. Not only can using mobile phones and

computers

help

people

overcome shy personalities and practice

communications

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, but it may

also

enhance the ability to cope with foreigners.