The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourst facilities.
The two maps illustrated the great changes before and after the construction of tourist facilities on the
island
.
Overall
, to attract more tourists, they established a restaurant, accommodations
, reception
, pier etc. Moreover
, the original plants and a beach were
remained to provide relaxation for them.
Before the construction, we can see there are some tropical plants on the Unnecessary verb
apply
island
, and a beach located in the northwest corner of the island
. Sea was at the north and south ends of this
island
.
After many years of construction, there was a significant change on this
island
. They provided a swimming area near the beach, and there is a footpath leading to accommodations
for tourists to live and relax. In the east direction of accommodations
, a reception
surrounded by a vehicle track located there, which people who live here can easily get access .
Change preposition
to .
Besides
that, there are more accommodations
in the east wing of the reception
. In the north, a restaurant is located on the edge of the island
where travellers can get food and snacks. A pier was built on the south side of the reception
, leading by the vehicle track, where visitors can row a boat.Submitted by zhouhao on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, accommodations, reception with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!