The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourst facilities.
The two maps illustrated the great changes before and after the construction of tourist facilities on the
island
.
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Overall
, to attract more tourists, they established a restaurant, Linking Words
accommodations
, Use synonyms
reception
, pier etc. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the original plants and a beach Linking Words
were
remained to provide relaxation for them.
Before the construction, we can see there are some tropical plants on the Unnecessary verb
apply
island
, and a beach located in the northwest corner of the Use synonyms
island
. Sea was at the north and south ends of Use synonyms
this
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island
.
After many years of construction, there was a significant change on Use synonyms
this
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island
. They provided a swimming area near the beach, and there is a footpath leading to Use synonyms
accommodations
for tourists to live and relax. In the east direction of Use synonyms
accommodations
, a Use synonyms
reception
surrounded by a vehicle track located there, which people who live here can easily get accessUse synonyms
.
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to .
Besides
that, there are more Linking Words
accommodations
in the east wing of the Use synonyms
reception
. In the north, a restaurant is located on the edge of the Use synonyms
island
where travellers can get food and snacks. A pier was built on the south side of the Use synonyms
reception
, leading by the vehicle track, where visitors can row a boat.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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