Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In China, their population is getting older and older; in the USA, there are various political conflicts; in Europe,
countries
are in a war crisis. No matter in Asia or Western countries
, they have to take up many challenges in the next
decade. Taiwan
will not be an exceptional case. In the following, I will discuss the challenge Taiwan
will face and how to deal with it.
In the next
decade, the energy
problem
will be a serious challenge to my country
, Taiwan
. The issue is that there is no reliable and environmentally friendly energy
resource. In Taiwan
, energy
supply primarily comes from burning fossil fuels, which provide more than sixty per cent of electric energy
. However
, this
source of energy
causes a serious problem
to the environment, particularly air pollution. In the process of energy
production, greenhouse gases and toxic substances will be released into the air. Another energy
source is nuclear power
. Yet, many scientists and engineers have safety concerns about nuclear power
. Especially, Taiwan
is an island country
similar to Japan. They worry that there will be nuclear accidents occurring in Taiwan
as well as Japan.
Then
, how can we deal with this
problem
? One way is to develop a new and sustainable energy
source. Apart from burning fuels and nuclear power
, there are many other energy
sources, such
as solar power
and wind power
. These power
sources are safe and less detrimental to the environment. And they have become more common in Europe countries
. Taiwan
governments may learn from these countries
by purchasing their technique and then
developing their own. The second
way is to use the energy
more efficiently. More specifically, the government should encourage factories and individuals only use electric energy
for necessary purposes. For doing so, governments may increase the electric prices or through education. This
proposal may not resolve the problem
entirely but can ease it.
In short, an essential difficulty in my country
is the energy
problem
, the lack of reliable and sustainable energy
resources. To address this
issue, I suggest the government explore new energy
resources and manage the country
's energy
usage more efficiently.Submitted by wing3602000 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite