You recently borrowed an item of clothing from a friend. While you had this item, it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: • apologise for damaging the item of clothing • explain how it became damaged • say what you will do to fix the problem

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Dear Anu, I hope you are doing great.I'm writing

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letter to bring your attention to a concern for your damaged jacket that I borrowed

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week from you to attend my college function. I feel really sorry that one side of the jacked pocket was damaged. I cannot find words to show how miserable as I know it is the most favourite

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you got as a token of love from your boyfriend. During dance time at college my friend pulled me from the pocket to his side it ripped that time which I did not notice during the party enjoyment but when I reached home my mother asked me about

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. I already checked with a tailor I assure tailor will fix

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one and I will compensate all the damage.If he cannot fix

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I will pay all the cost of jacked to you. Once again I

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sorry try my best to do the right things please let me know if anything you want to change. Yours Sincerely, Amandeep Kaur

Submitted by amandeepmanngat93 on Fri Jan 24 2025

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity. The paragraph explaining how the jacket was damaged combines several ideas and could be clearer.

task achievement

Check for grammatical accuracy and punctuation to enhance clarity and professionalism. For example, 'I'm writing this letter to bring your attention to a concern for your damaged jacket...' could be 'I'm writing to inform you about the damage to your jacket...'

coherence cohesion

You have structured your letter well, with clear sections addressing the apology, explanation, and solution.

task achievement

Your tone is very appropriate and sincere, which is suitable for writing to a friend about this issue.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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