the world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and the governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Compared with the previous war conditions, the

world

seems to walk through the darkest time in history. I agree with the

statements

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that the

world

today is a much safer place than it was a hundred years ago and

the

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that

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governments should stop spending large amounts of

money

on their armed

froces

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forces

. The

first

reason is that since the

world

is in a better condition now, spending so much

money

on armed

force

is a waste and

money

should

be invest

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in more important things that

benefits

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more people. As we all have known, the armed forces cost a lot of

money

, from inventing

the

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weapons, building forts, and hiring

soilders

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soldiers

and scientists.

This

large amount of

money

comes from the tax paid by normal citizens. In my opinion, that tax should be used on more vital and urgent matters that can benefit the citizens,

such

as

infrastruture

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infrastructure

, education and employment. The

second

reason is that if one government spends

money

on armed forces, the other countries will follow,

that

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will

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creat

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a vicious cycle. Some countries with poor economic conditions still

spending

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large

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amount

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of

money

on their armed

force

, because they need to defend

if

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another country attacks them. The only way to solve the problem and maintain the

world

in its peaceful condition is that all the countries

stop

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investing

on

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weapons and armed

force

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. In conclusion, I agree with the statement that the

world

is

in

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a safer place now and governments should never spend so much

money

on

arm

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force

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,

instead

, the

money

should be used on more

impotant

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important

issues that can enhance the

citizens

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citizen's

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welfare.