Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In today’s ,time it has been seen that each country is having
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issues as climate change, overpopulation, a better education etc. but for about the
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decade it will suffer from a new dilemma. In
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essay I will talk about my country- India- has to face
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types of complications in the upcoming ten years. It is undeniable that natural and unnatural disasters have a huge impact on the community
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, all regions want to keep safe their civilians by taking some impactful actions.
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,
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problems as rising in the mean temperature of the earth, the reason behind that was the as predicted result of overpopulation.
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, having an extremely populated area will end with a shortage of natural minerals and
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and due to lack of the
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people will fight for their land,
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, it may end with a national or an international issue.
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-according in the current ,situation there is an ongoing war between two countries over
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but the dark side of that battle is, that it took too many lives of their own civilians which damaged their own generation. And it is not a surprise if there will be a war of cyber war-the result of the extreme
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of technology. So as the solution to these problems is not easy as everyone thinks. For the start
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step is to control the population by introducing an attractive scheme regarding their maternal health so people get aware of their own internal organs
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, there will be a limited amount of
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of human
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, by avoiding the
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of carbon monoxide emission vehicle or any household appliances may help to maintain the earth temperature so the world can save the iceberg as they are. Adding some restrictions on the
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of technology and some awareness may help to avoid future cyberwar. To conclude, spreading awareness about the complications of overpopulation-which is at some point the main caution- may help to prevent many other obstacles to the bright future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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