Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think it has made him less social. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays with the increasing technological level of the whole world, some
people
think that new developments have made man more social, while others think it has made him less social. In this
essay
I am going to discuss these two views and give my own opinion.
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,essay
First
of all, let's talk about the types of technologies that have been invented in recent years. The most impressive ones are both the Internet
and smartphones. They have changed the way humanity receive
information from the outer world. Correct subject-verb agreement
receives
For instance
, a person from Japan can find a friend with similar interests and tastes from the USA, companies can manage their job and sell their goods using websites in
the Change the preposition
on
Internet
.
Unfortunately, since there are a lot of opportunities to get a job or to find someone, a high amount of people
has begun wasting their time mostly at home. Also
, there are dozens of applications to find a partner on social media, namely Badoo, Tinder and etc. Meanwhile, there are many "trolls" in those places, so they are able to hurt mentally other internet
users. As a result
some men, which might been
rejected or insulted in past, have got social anxiety and don't try to be confident in public places. According to Change the verb form
be
the
article from a scientific magazine, the number of real meetings has decreased by 25 Correct article usage
an
percent
since Change the spelling
per cent
the
2000 year.
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apply
However
, the existing websites and online computer games similarly
can affect men in a positive way. It means that a person who talks with teammates in games or with colleagues in chat rooms tends to develop social qualities. For example
, anyone, who wants to learn a foreign language, can find an individual who also
wants to learn it. Hence
it creates a new circle of virtual relations that stand on the same level as ordinary relations in real life.
To sum up, I want to say that people
must get used to the new system of socialization on the Internet
. I hope that this
area will experience further
improvements, such
as filtering and deleting toxic people
, to make interactions between users easier and more comfortable.Submitted by ilchikaev on
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