Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regards to your letter received yesterday please accept my sincere apologies for the inconvenience you faced owing to the noise level.

Firstly

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I would like to inform you that as you know we are moved here

last

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week and the house was abandoned for more than 3 years so in order to make it suitable for living plenty of refurbishment is required for a number of areas.

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, all the noise is mainly because of repair and maintenance.

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, I admitted that it is quite difficult to concentrate on copious things due to high sounds but already told you that it is mainly due to the construction

however

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I would like to say sorry again and accept it.

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, The work is almost near to end and ,hopefully. it will be complete

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couple of days

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I assure you that it will not

further

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disturb your comfort.

moreover

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, I made a plan to combat those issues to a minimum level

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as repairing and maintenance will be carrying that time when you were in college . Thank you in advance! Yours Sincerely, Shaban Raza

Submitted by Shabanraza489 on Sat Apr 02 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Many children are encoraged by their parents to get a part time. What are the advantages and disadvantage to children of doing so?

You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Ask your friend to send you a particular photograph Explain why you need that particular photograph Tell your friend what happened to your copy of it

Write about the following topic: Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write informal letter to your friend.

proportion of males and females in Australia in different age groups who did daily exercise in 2010.