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In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this situation true in your country?

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The given blueprints (of) two different plans designed for a conference
room
. The
first
 similarity between (the) two plans is in its
entrace
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entrance
 which is on the top right-hand corner of the
room
. In
plan
 A’s
design
, while morning tea is served at the back of the
room
 behind the tables, it can be found in one corner of the
room
 in the layout in
plan
 B.
Addition
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, there is one
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whiteboard
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white board
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whiteboard
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 placed in front of the tables together with
presenter’s
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the presenter’s
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 chair in
plan
 A’s
design
.
Besides
, in
plan
 B, it has one
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whiteboard
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white board
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whiteboard
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puts
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put
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 behind the chair of the presenter. It can be seen that three tables of
plan
 A are placed
next
 to each other in the middle of the
room
 forming U-shaped. It can see easily that the capacity of
room
 B is more than A. In
plan
 A’s
design
, the direction of the person sitting is inward.
Podium’s
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The podium’s
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 position in
plan
 A is in the left corner
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of
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pf
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of
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 the
room
next
 to
thw
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the
 whiteboard, while there is no podium in
plan
 B’s
design
.
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